Crimson whispers fall,
soft breath carries gold away,
silence holds the dusk.
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Tim Carmichael
I’m a firm believer life is messy, beautiful, and too short, which is why I write poems full of heart and humor. I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. My book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇
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Regarding the Image of God
This post will be a bit of a strange one. I wrote most of the following piece about six months ago, as certain governmental policies and actions were starting to roll out - and while reflecting upon certain ongoing atrocities. While these reflections revolve mostly around those claiming and practicing the Christian faith (and our failures to do so rightly) I do believe that they might be provide valuable insight - or at least something to think about - for folks of all perspectives who are willing to read them. So without further ado, here are a few of my recent reflections regarding the biblical concept of the 'image of God.'
By Gabriel Huizenga7 days ago in The Swamp
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I love the soft touch this brings. The whisper very much in line. With the soft delivery and the meaning. The breath carrying the gold. I like that. I like how silence was personified. The hand holding the dusk makes the world feel — and it is — feels so vast. All the very best of luck on the challenge Tim 🤗❤️
This is perfect. Sounds like a gentle autumn breeze
Crimson whispers falling, I love that!
That is some vivid imagery, great use of sound