Losing Control
For Paul and John's Three Word Haiku/Senryu Unofficial Challenge
Humiliating,
Undifferentiating,
Overpowering
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Thank you, Paul and John for the inspiration. It's amazing what you can say with three words.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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A Transparent Look at Vocal Challenges and Top Stories
Almost three years ago, we shared a resource article that served as a place for people to suggest new challenge prompts. We thought it would be a good idea to refresh that thread, and take the opportunity to answer a few common questions about top stories, how challenges are judged and how submissions are reviewed.
By Vocal Curation Team6 days ago in Resources
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The results are in - check them out - https://goodofferhubx.top/writers/john-and-paul-s-three-word-haiku-senryu-unofficial-challenge-the-results%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Powerful & effective!
Very powerful!
Well done!
Julie - It is absolutely amazing what you can say in just three words. It highlights our current situation in just three words. Nicely Done!!!
YES Thank you 💪⛹️♀️🏀🥇🏊♀️❤😆🎇🎇🎆🌌🌅⛩️⛩️⛩️⛩️ . . . . BLESSINGS! Power to you! 🛸🌆🌆😆😆😆 . . . . 🎇🎇🎆⛩️ . . ⛩️⛩️ . .
Good one!
The word choice is impeccable. ‘Undifferentiating’ especially lingered in my mind.
Thank you for taking part and if such a biting examination of modern times! Ive subscribed to you, as wasn't already so looking forward to reading more by you! thank you again for taking part!
Fabulous well done 🏆🦋🦋🦋
Great use of three words to highlight our current nightmare! Very impressive! ⚡💙 Bill ⚡
Nicely written ❤️ 👌