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Our Untold Promise

a vow we felt, but never voiced

By Aahna RajeshPublished about 7 hours ago 1 min read

Do you remember the promise ?

The promise you made to stay...

But yet you left -

Not forever, I guess?

The whispered promise to celebrate?

From which I still bleed -

The tears you said i would never shed...

Did you forget , or lie?

You dissolved into thin air -

Yet somehow became a part of me, like limerence.

I search for you like hidden treasure,

buried where no one else could ever find.

Your presence is like an untold colour,

A quiet qualm when you are not here.

Still, I trust the quiet string of may heart -

That you’ll return to me whole, untouched by fear.

Like a promise that lasts forever.

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About the Creator

Aahna Rajesh

Just A GCSE student making some poems.. (\/)('-')

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