On the trampoline,
I told him, โCapture me in cloudsโโ
bubble pops mid-air.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When Iโm not lost in my own plots, Iโm either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging lifeย withย aย grin.
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (8)
This is so playful :-)
My brain is trying to unpack this ๐ Trampoline- fun " capture me in the clouds"- whimsical but the bubble popping - usually a reality check So it's a thought-provoker for sure, a wee mystery...๐ค Great job on this Haiku! ๐โ๏ธโค๏ธ
So there's a lot to unpack here lol my brain says " trampoline- fun" , "catch me in the clouds"- bouncing high fun and then the "bubble pops mid-air" is the bubble bursting, usually not fun. A wee mystery and thought-provoking riddling... ๐ค we need a sequel! ๐๐ผโ๏ธโ๏ธ๐
Wow ๐คฉ Brilliant
playful haiku an allusion to something more
Supercute stuff Koko!
I appreciate how many questions this haiku begs! :) Great job!
Did he catch you ? I love this playful Haiku poem, Komal. ๐ฅฐ