I can’t get anything done,
all I can think of is sap rising,
Pistils and stamen exploding,
Stiff rods with soft crowns
Cream and sugar
without coffee
Heat rising, center broadcasting,
heat-seeking missiles
in the electric air,
pulsating, pushing through
clouds, thick and white:
cumulus, striated, heavy
with rain they can’t hold
much longer,
cloudburst overdue
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
I'm a subversive weirdo nerd witch who loves rocks. Intrusive rhyme bothers me. Some of my fiction may have provoked divorce proceedings in another state.😈
My words are mine. Suggest ai use and get eviscerated.
MA English literature, CofC
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (3)
I love it. I can see what you're feeling because I could feel it in your piece. Great writing.
Oh, Dylan Thomas much?
I love this one. This is you, Harper. You written all over it.