Table for One
Haiku of Now
By Tina D. LopezPublished about a month ago • Updated about a month ago • 1 min read
Photo by Karen Sewell on Unsplash
Scanning the menu
no sharing my ribs tonight
table set for one
Scanning the menu
no sharing my ribs tonight
table set for one
Comments (2)
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This is amazing, and if you are open to suggestion, a different last line like "I'll have the apple" would knock this into orbit. I see what you did in the middle line; bring it home in the last one. Potential for greatness in this.