The Rain ruined the cake
The day God took you away

The Rain ruined the cake
I baked a cake for us to share
set out the chairs, the table bare
the plates were waiting side by side
for laughs and love you’d never hide
But skies grew dark, the storm broke through
the icing ran, the candles too
the rain fell hard on all I made
and washed our quiet plans away
I sat alone, the day turned grey
the guests were clouds, the sky was clay
no voice, no step along the way,
just silence where you used to stay
And in the storm I tried to pray
but you just never came that dreadful day
when God made plans to take you away.

About the Creator
George’s Girl 2026
I've been writing poetry since the age of 10. With pen in hand, I wander the realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture you ❤️#Marie381UkWrites



Comments (1)
Heartbreaking outcome; beautiful writing Marie!