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Marky the Magnificent Fairy
Marky the Magnificent Fairy is a children's picture about a small fairy who is special in many ways. This is a story about diversity and inclusion in society. Marky may not be able to fly but she has many other talents to choose from to help her fit in society.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
How to Critique a Blog Post
A blog critique is a written evaluation of a blog post. It can be used to improve the writing, content, or design of the blog post. When critiquing a blog post, it is important to be constructive and specific. The goal is to help the author improve their blog post, not to tear it down.
By Timothy A Rowland3 years ago in Critique
Don't Blame Me
A book that changed me......not from the reading aspect, (Many have done that.) but from the writing aspect. I am a beginner! I tackled a huge story! One I was nowhere near qualified to take on as a debut. But I like a challenge. Sometimes I fail at it, sometimes I succeed. No matter the outcome, the challenge alone teaches. Writing this tale not only challenged me but changed me!
By Diana K Robinson3 years ago in Critique
Critique Request: The Fight in the Dog
It was almost exactly a year ago that Vocal held the New Worlds challenge, where we were bid to write the first chapter of a science fiction novel. This was my submission:
By Madoka Mori3 years ago in Critique
'This Side of Paradise'
Here is a critique of a classic novel that I just finished about a week ago. The name of the novel is 'This Side of Paradise'. The author is quite famous for a lot of his work. His name is F. Scott Fitzgerald. My idea is to start reading or even re-reading and offering reviews and critiques of my collection of classic novels that I have bought over the years.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Vocal Critique
Vocal is a platform where the user can opt in to be a paid member to enter challenges and get more money per read. Every piece of writing whether you like it or not is a work of art. I use it to express the darkness and blessings I have.
By Sid Aaron Hirji3 years ago in Critique
Not gonna cry
I ain't no crybaby. Except when it comes to elephants. There is some kind of pathos with elephants which means I cry easily where elephants are involved. And my son recently suggested a put down a book which featured on its cover both the word "goodbye" and an image of a dog. He is wise.
By Hannah Moore3 years ago in Critique
The Life-Changing Magic of Tidying Up: The Japanese Art of Decluttering and Organizing - Critique
Start By asking "WHY" Every step of the way Do it EXACTLY As she says Pretend Tidying Is the game to play Mastering
By Tessa Talia Rose3 years ago in Critique
A Few More
A fist full of words Just a few critiques more That’s what was in store When the word slinger Pulled the computer from the drawer
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
Unforgiving- Alien Weaponry
I hate to admit that the first time I heard Unforgiving was in concert. The first time was surreal, as I stood next to my brother, who I nearly lost the previous year. Little did I know a year later, this would be my comfort song when my grandmother passed.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
Man In The Box
Man In The Box has always been my favorite Alice In Chains song. Perhaps because I’ve often felt that I’ve been trying to escape the box that people are always trying to paint me into. Most definitely it has something to do with Layne Staley and Jerry Cantrell’s vocal styling.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
Unwrapping Barbie: Balancing Beauty, Impact and Imagination in 50 Words
An iconic figure influencing values. Plastic perfection upholds unattainable beauty standards. Barbie Movies: Colorful tales weaving friendship and ambition, but some critics note formulaic plots, provoking discussions about femininity. Cinematic journeys inspire despite debates
By Tereza Giannouri3 years ago in Critique